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2013-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

hello. nice to meet to you. my name is [이름]. my English name is Elena. you say call me.Elena. I am [Name] four years old. I am married and we have two kids. I made my New year's resolutions. first, try to lose weight. second, study English hard. I wanna English education because of I can not speak English. I hope all my resolutions will come true this year. I finish introduce myself. All hope good performance fulfill. have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [Name]! Thank you so much for your composition today! I am so glad that you spent time in writing this in order for me to get to know you better. Don\'t worry, I will do my best to help you. Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. We can do it! Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^ hello. nice to meet to you. >> Hello! Nice to meet you.My name is [이름].>> Correct My English name is Elena.>> Correct you say call me.Elena.>> You can call me Elena.I am thirty-four years old.>> Correct I am married and we have two kids.>> Correct I made my New year\'s resolutions.>> Correct first, try to lose weight.>> First, I will try to lose weight.second, study English hard.>> Second, I will study hard in English.I wanna English education because of I can not speak English.>> I want to study English because I can\'t speak English well.I hope all my resolutions will come true this year.>> Correct I finish introduce myself.>> I am finished with my self-introduction.All hope good performance fulfill.>> I hope I can fulfill my dreams and have good performance.Have a nice day. >> Correct

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