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because I can speak a three language have a good conditoin then another one so it is easy to be. diplomat is very hard job, competition is very high but I will never give up my dreaming! if I be the diplomat I will develop economy and environment of korea. my desire is that my family are happy and health...

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending a nice composition. You are very smart kid. I know, if you just believe in what you can do for your family and country then you will become a 'GREAT LEADER' someday. Study hard always! T. Judy Here are my corrections: because I can speak a three language have a good conditoin then another one so it is easy to be.  >> Because I can speak three languages, I have an advantage to others so it is easy to for me to express myself. diplomat is very hard job, competition is very high but I will never give up my dreaming! >> Being a diplomat is a very hard job. Competition is very high but I will never give up fulfilling my dream! if I be the diplomat I will develop economy and environment of korea. >> If I will be a diplomat, I will develop the economy and environment of Korea. my desire is that my family are happy and health... >>My only desire is that my family will stay happy and healthy.