about melancholy

2010-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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A friend who was a member the picnic yesterday have had a hard time. Because she broke up with her boy friend lately. The reason why they were broken was cooling love. Even though because of her, they were parting, she have felt a pain. She pretended cheerful herself but I was worried about her mood. And when we were having a dinner, her ex-boy freind, he and I remains good freinds, called me at that time by chance. I know her feeling well. she missed him. And I know too. He was not a lover but he was a good friend for her. It maybe make her lonely. With missing her lover she missed her friend too. I'm so sorry about it. So maybe I tried I would not lose my ex-boyfriend as a friend.

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Oh this was sad news. But I hope that your friend and her ex-boyfriend will talk one day and fix things for them to become friends. But as you have said earlier it will take time to do so. I hope everything will be fine with your friend. She's just lucky that she has a friend like you who can cheer her up. ^^ Lei J   A friend who was a member the picnic yesterday have had a hard time.>>A friend who joined our picnic yesterday have had a hard time. Because she broke up with her boyfriend lately.>>correct >>Because lately, she broke up with her boyfriend.The reason why they were broken was cooling love.>>The reason why they broke up is that they have fallen out of love. Even though because of her, they were parting, she have felt a pain.>>Even though its because of her that they parted, she still felt pain.She pretended cheerful herself but I was worried about her mood.>>She pretended being cheerful but I was worried about her mood/atittude.And when we were having a dinner, her ex-boy freind, he and I remains good freinds, called me at that time by chance.>>While we are having dinner, her ex-boyfriend who happened to be my friend called me by chance.I know her feeling well. she missed him.>>I know her well, how she was feeling and that she still misses him.And I know too. >>correct He was not a lover but he was a good friend for her.>>Maybe he was not a good lover but he was a good friend to her.It maybe make her lonely.>>That maybe makes her feel lonely.With missing her lover she missed her friend too.>>Because her missing her lover she misses her friend too.I'm so sorry about it.>>correctSo maybe I tried I would not lose my ex-boyfriend as a friend. >>correct

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