About Memory

When I clean my desk and room, ( Can I use a verd "order" in the sentence?) sometimes I find my old things. It is called memories. (It is called 추억 from Korea) That time when I find that, I can't clean my desk and room anymore because I'm fascinated by memories. Sometimes the memories make me laugh, cry and happy. So, I missed my real task that have to do in time. However, I don't care about my imperfect cleaning because I see very valuable film which is named The beautiful memory. And I think that the memory is beautiful because we can't go back.

Hi my dear [이름], thank you so much for dropping by to make your composition. I totally agree with you when you said that we can\'t bring the old memories back, but its good as well because we have a lot things to remember and Im glad you do that..:) Anyway thank you once again for your composition and talk to you again tomorrow..:) xoxoTeacher Cam^^ When I clean my desk and room, ( Can I use a verd \"order\" in the sentence?)sometimes I find my old things.>>correct >>Sometimes when I organize my things in my desk and in my room, I find my old things..Its better to use the verb ORGANIZEIt is called memories. (It is called 추억 from Korea)>>correctThat time when I find that, I can\'t clean my desk and room anymore because I\'m fascinated by memories.>>correctSometimes the memories make me laugh, cry and happy. So, I missed my real task that have to do in time. >>correctHowever, I don\'t care about my imperfect cleaning because I see very valuable film which is named The beautiful memory.>>correctAnd I think that the memory is beautiful because we can\'t go back. >>And I think that memory is great because we can\'t bring the old memories back