About Museum
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Museum is a place to keep data and display and exhibit materials such as history, folk, art, natural science and others.
So we can see, feel, and learn various things.
This may be one of the museum’s most distinctive features.
These days, it is loosing precious value, but it can be preserved at the museums.
I now remember \'Lubro Museum\' in Paris, France. I haven\'t been to there yet but I saw it in the book.
If we go there and watch works, we\'ll be able to see, feel and learn a lot about the past history through many works.
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Museum is a place to keep data and display and exhibit materials such as history, folk, art, natural science and others.
>> A museum is a place to keep data and display and exhibit materials related to history, folk, art, natural science and others.
So we can see, feel, and learn various things.
So we can see, feel, and learn various things.
>> This is so we can see, feel, and learn various things.
This may be one of the museum’s most distinctive features.
This may be one of the museum’s most distinctive features.
>> Correct
These days, it is loosing precious value, but it can be preserved at the museums.
These days, it is loosing precious value, but it can be preserved at the museums.
>> These days, many things are losing their value, but they can be preserved in museums.
I now remember \'Lubro Museum\' in Paris, France.
I now remember \'Lubro Museum\' in Paris, France.
>> I now remember \"The Louvre\" which is a museum in Paris, France.
I haven\'t been to there yet but I saw it in the book.
>> I haven\'t been there but but I saw it in a book.
If we go there and watch works, we\'ll be able to see, feel and learn a lot about the past history through many works.
If we go there and watch works, we\'ll be able to see, feel and learn a lot about the past history through many works.
>> If we go there and look at the different pieces, we\'ll be able to see, feel and learn a lot about the past.
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