About my bad habits

2012-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Carly

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I think my bad habit is crying. I'm an adult so I don't want to be crying. But I can't control my sweet. It makes me indiscreet and I don't want it. I know what is my faults but I can't control my sweet at that time. So I'm really worry this. Since it will be bad at working in company. Carly. What is our conversation topic? You didn't mention this yesterday. I hope to know this no later than our call.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ji [이름]! ^^, Good job on your composition! It\'s almost perfect but very good use of vocabulary. Check out the corrections I made for some of your sentences as well as my suggestions. We will continue with our topic yesterday about stereotyping. It\'s a very broad and interesting topic so I thought we should go deeper. Thank you for always preparing for our class! ^^, - Teacher Carly-   I think my bad habit is crying. >>CORRECTI\'m an adult so I don\'t want to be crying. >>CORRECT >>OR I\'m an adult so I don\'t want to cry anymore.But I can\'t control my sweet. >>CORRECTIt makes me indiscreet and I don\'t want it. >>CORRECTI know what is my faults but I can\'t control my sweet at that time. >> I know what my faults are but I can\'t control my sweet at that time.So I\'m really worry this. >>So I\'m really worried about this. Since it will be bad at working in company.>>Since it will be bad when I start working in a company.Carly, what is our conversation topic? >>CORRECTYou didn\'t mention this yesterday. >>CORRECTI hope to know this no later than our call. >>CORRECT  

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