about my best or worst experiences in 2011
학생이 쓴 원문
2010 is flying by so quickly and I feel like I still have lots of unfinished business. I regret that I didn't stick to many of my New Year resolutions. I vowed to lose at least ten kilos, but I'm pretty much the same weight. It is my worst thing not to keep my promise to lose my weight. On a brighter note, I did my best to improve my English ablility with you, so I feel like I can speak English more naturally than before. Thank you for your helping.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday! I hope you have a great time in class. There are some mistakes that you\'ve made, but don\'t be sad because you\'ll be better soon. I hope you continue sending your compositions and homework for me to check, so that we could focus on what we\'ll be improving in our class. I hope you get well very soon.
-Teacher Jane-
2010 is flying by so quickly and I feel like I still have lots of unfinished business.
>>CORRECT
I regret that I didn\'t stick to many of my New Year resolutions.
>>CORRECT
I vowed to lose at least ten kilos, but I\'m pretty much the same weight.
>>CORRECT
It is my worst thing not to keep my promise to lose my weight.
>>It is the worst thing not to keep your promise for yourself.
On a brighter note, I did my best to improve my English ablility with you, so I feel like I can speak English more naturally than before.
>>CORRECT
Thank you for your helping.
>>Thank you for your help.
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