About my children\'s careers
학생이 쓴 원문
I have always been supportive of my children\'s decisions regardless of subjects. When they decided what to major in their college and what kind of job to have, I did support. Even though I had different ideas from them, I didn\'t express my thoughts strongly. But now I try to suggest how to live and what to do to succeed in the future. I think that they can understand my opinions more easily than before through their experiences in working and earning for a living.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework! It\'s nice to know that even though you have a different opinion, you chose to respect your daughters\' decision and supported them.
- T. Caitlyn
I have always been supportive of my children\'s decisions regardless of subjects.
>> CORRECT
When they decided what to major in their college and what kind of job to have, I did support.
>> When they decided on their college majors and future careers, I supported them.
Even though I had different ideas from them, I didn\'t express my thoughts strongly.
>> CORRECT
But now I try to suggest how to live and what to do to succeed in the future.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Now, I try to offer suggestions on how to live and what to do to succeed in the future.
I think that they can understand my opinions more easily than before through their experiences in working and earning for a living.
>> CORRECT
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