About my dreams
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강사 첨삭
Hi, A-Rim! Thank you for sharing about this. I know that you will do great in whatever you choose to do because you are talented and hardworking!
~ Teacher Marie
My dream was a pianist.
>> My dream was to become a pianist.
However, I have to focus on both studying and playing piano
>> That means, I have to focus on both studying and playing the piano.\\
and I thought about that playing piano is really interesting for me.
>> I thought that playing the piano would be really interesting.
As a result, It wasn’t very interesting to play the piano, so I decided to study hard.
>> However, it was not that interesting; so, I decided to just study hard.
During I was going to school, I had in English newspaper school club and I was Interested in English teacher. >> At school, there is an English newspaper club and I became interested in being an English teacher.
So I will do my best to be a English teacher.
>> So, I will do my best to be an English teacher.
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