About my dreams

We have a lot of dreams. Therfore,I also have my dreams. I want to be a professor in my university. But I have to get a doctor of philosophy abroad. I'm serious about this since I don't have a plenty of money. If I can't go to Hongkong or America,I will get my job in Korea. Being a professor is not my final goal. I want to help poor children which is my final goal. I will be rich person for helping poor children. Korea is the special country since it changed from beneficiary country to donor country. Nowadays, I am working in Save The Children as a volunteer. It's my presure. Have you ever heard Save The children? You can guess this from the name. It's non-goverment organization. I want to make helpful surrounding for children. And I want to make a small school in beneficiary country. The school' name will be my valuable friend's name or husband's name. It's romantic, isn't it? Anyway, I have to study hard from now on for my dreams.

Hi there! ^^, I had a lot of fun reading your composition because I was so amazed to learn that you volunteer for an organization that helps people. It's very nice that people like you wants to help other people from other countries. Be careful with your articles because there are some sentences that you need them and on some that you need to remove. See you in class later! ^^, Teacher Carly We have a lot of dreams. >>CORRECTTherfore,I also have my dreams. >> Therefore,I also have my dreams.I want to be a professor in my university. >>CORRECTBut I have to get a doctor of philosophy abroad. >>CORRECTI\'m serious about this since I don\'t have a plenty of money. >> I\'m serious about this since I don\'t have plenty of money.  If I can\'t go to Hongkong or America,I will get my job in Korea. >>CORRECTBeing a professor is not my final goal. >>CORRECTI want to help poor children which is my final goal. >> I want to help poor children which is my ultimate goal.I will be rich person for helping poor children. >>I will be a rich person for helping poor children.Korea is the special country since it changed from beneficiary country to donor country. >> Korea is a special country since it changed from a beneficiary country to a donor country.Nowadays, I am working in Save The Children as a volunteer. >>CORRECTIt\'s my presure. >>It's my pleasure.Have you ever heard Save The children? >>CORRECTYou can guess this from the name. >>CORRECTIt\'s non-goverment organization. >> It\'s a non-goverment organization.I want to make helpful surrounding for children. >> I want to make a helpful surrounding for children.And I want to make a small school in beneficiary country. >>CORRECTThe school\' name will be my valuable friend\'s name or husband\'s name. >> The school\'s name will be my valuable friend\'s name or husband\'s name.It\'s romantic, isn\'t it? >>CORRECT >>OR Isn't it romantic?Anyway, I have to study hard from now on for my dreams. >>CORRECT