About my favorite holiday.

Do you know the national foundation day of Korea? I'd like to introdue this. I heard that all of country have thier founding story. It's very similar. In korea, we have a founding tale. As a result, we have the national foundation day of Korea. It's on octorber 3. I like this holiday. Since the date is on octorber 3, I can have a rest time during the semester. Therefore, it's my favorite. When I was a children, we have more holidays. but it decreased since our working date is changed form 6days to 5days. we don't have a lot of holiday. So I love every holiday.

Hi Ji [이름]! ^^, I had a lot of fun with our class today and thank you for that. It's interesting to know more about Korea's holidays and your almost perfect composition is very nice to read. Please do check the corrections I made to some of your sentences, Have a nice evening! ^^, Teacher Carly Do you know the national foundation day of Korea? >>CORRECTI\'d like to introdue this. >>CORRECT >>OR I\'d like to introdue this holiday to you.I heard that all of country have thier founding story. >> I heard that all countries have their founding story.It\'s very similar. >>CORRECTIn Korea, we have a founding tale. >>CORRECTAs a result, we have the national foundation day of Korea. >>CORRECTIt\'s on Octorber 3. >>CORRECTI like this holiday. >>CORRECT Since the date is on Octorber 3, I can have a rest time during the semester. >>CORRECTTherefore, it\'s my favorite. >>CORRECTWhen I was a children, we have more holidays. >> When I was a child, we had a lot of holidays.But it decreased since our working date is changed from 6days to 5days. >>CORRECTWe don\'t have a lot of holiday. >>CORRECT So I love every holiday. >>CORRECT