About my favorite Time
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
My favorite time of the day is my free time. Before sleep every night, I have some my free time. At this time, I play mobile games or watch TV like YouTube or movies. By having this time, I relieve stress. This is why my favorite time of the day is my free time.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] Ho! Excellent work on your homework today!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
Before sleep every night, I have some my free time.
>>Before sleeping every night, I have some free time.
At this time, I play mobile games or watch TV like YouTube or movies.
>>CORRECT
By having this time, I relieve stress.
>>CORRECT
This is why my favorite time of the day is my free time.
>>CORRECT
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