About my friends
학생이 쓴 원문
I have many friends. And some friends are funny, kind, or good. And many people have each\'s best friend. I have best friend too. Today, I introduce my best friend. I met my friend last year. I met him in my classroom. He and I also love League of Lengends, and we now each other. And he and I also like same E sports team, T1. And before that time every day we play together. And this time, I played game with my friend too. I think friend is very greatful thing.
강사 첨삭
Hello, John! Thank you for introducing your best friend to me. I hope your friendship lasts for a long time!
-T. Sonny
I have many friends.
>>Correct!
And some friends are funny, kind, or good.
>>Some of them are funny, kind, or good.
And many people have each\'s best friend.
>>Many of us have our own bestfriend.
I have best friend too.
>>I have a best friend, too.
Today, I introduce my best friend.
>>Today, I will tell you about my bestfriend.
I met my friend last year.
>>I met him last year.
I met him in my classroom.
>>We first met in our classroom.
He and I also love League of Lengends, and we now each other.
>>We both love League of Legends and we know each other.
And he and I also like same E sports team, T1.
>>We also like the same E-sports team called T1.
And before that time every day we play together.
>>Before that time, we played together everyday.
And this time, I played game with my friend too.
>>And currently, we play games together, too.
I think friend is very greatful thing.
>>I think, having a friend is a great thing.
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