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2025-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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Traveling alone helps me pushed to make all decisions myself (where to go, how to solve problems, how to handle loneliness) and it makes me notice more about my own habits, preferences, and limits because I don’t have to compromise with anyone. Finally? I often grow in independence and confidence from traveling alone. In short, traveling alone usually teaches me about my inner self and independence as well. Thank you for your thoughtful homework.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Charlie^^
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s really insightful.
_T. SHAY^^
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Traveling alone helps me pushed to make all decisions myself (where to go, how to solve problems, how to handle loneliness) and it makes me notice more about my own habits, preferences, and limits because I don’t have to compromise with anyone. 
>>Traveling alone pushes me to make all the decisions myself (where to go, how to solve problems, how to handle loneliness), and it makes me notice more about my own habits, preferences, and limits because I don\'t have to compromise with anyone. 
OR: Solo travel pushes me to handle everything myself and helps me better understand my own strengths, weaknesses, and preferences because I don\'t need to adjust to another person.
Finally? I often grow in independence and confidence from traveling alone. 
>>Correct
OR: Traveling alone allows me to develop greater independence and self-confidence.
In short, traveling alone usually teaches me about my inner self and independence as well.

>>Correct
OR: Ultimately, traveling alone teaches me both self-awareness and independence.

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