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In fact, there is a previous co-worker in INC.

>> Did you mean: In fact, I have a previous co-worker in INC.

His name is JungJun Kim and he told me that his satisfaction in INC is very good.

>> His name is JungJun Kim and he told me that he is really satisfied with INC.

As you know, CRA’s life is too tight and is pressed for a time.

>> Correct

But I heard that INC cares about an intense workload for employees.

>> Correct

That’s why I [이름]se your company needless to say.

>> Correct

I think current company is also good but I think my effort was not rewarded appropriately.

>> I think my current company is also good but I think my effort was not rewarded appropriately.

After a year from I entered PAREXEL, the company evaluated all employee’s performance.

>> After a year since I entered PAREXEL, the company evaluated all employee’s performance.

My clinical operating leader gave me the best scores at all evaluation items.

>> My clinical operating leader gave me the best scores on all evaluation items.

However, the company kept making excuses with any other reasons so that I could not get a promotion.

>> Correct

So I got depressed a bit.

>> Correct

>> OR: So I was a bit depressed.

I would like to be recognized for my ability in INC.

>> Correct

I can enter your company on September fifteen.

>> Correct

It will be fresh Monday.

>> It will be a fresh Monday.