about my job1.
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Do you know my position? I couldn't remember if i told you about it while we met when jenny went to USA. primarily I think I need to tell you about my company. my company is a shipbuilding company. the name is SPP. it's a medium company but our company is getting to bigger and bigger. our company's major business is shipbuilding. and there are another part of subsidiary companies. in part of shipbuilding, there are Three large yard. i have been working at one of them since last september.
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Do you know my position?
>>>correct
>>>Have I told you about my position?- better
I couldn't remember if i told you about it while we met when jenny went to USA.
>>>I couldn't remember if I told you about that when Jenny went to USA.
primarily I think I need to tell you about my company.
>>>correct
my company is a shipbuilding company. the name is SPP.
>>>My company is a shipbuilding company named SPP.
it's a medium company but our company is getting to bigger and bigger.
>>> Its just an average- sized company but its getting bigger and bigger.
our company's major business is shipbuilding. and there are another part of subsidiary companies.
>>>Our company's major business is shipbuilding and the others are another part of subsidiaries.
in part of shipbuilding, there are Three large yard.
>>>In this part, there are three major fields.
i have been working at one of them since last september.
>>>I've been working in one of these fields since last September.
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