about my job2 .
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I have two position. the major position is secretary. I am assistant of our yard manger. and the minor position is teammember in product planning. Until last Desember, I had many free time during the day. because I was just do my major positon. but since this year, my team boss gave me team task. So i was quite busy until this wednesday.
But today I have many time to study. because the yard manager went to official trip. and i finished urgent my team task yesterday.^ ^
I'm sorry about i did a lot of composing today. and I expect you would understand me.
Have a nice day. See you tommorow.
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I have two position. the major position is secretary.
>>>I have two positions, one of my positions is being a Secretary in our company.
I am assistant of our yard manger.
>>>I am the assisitant of our Field Manager.
and the minor position is teammember in product planning.
>>>My other position is being a member of a product planning team.
Until last Desember, I had many free time during the day. because I was just do my major positon.
>>> Last December, I had a lot of free time during the day, because I was just doing my major position.
but since this year, my team boss gave me team task. So i was quite busy until this wednesday.
>>>But since this year, my boss gave me a team task, so I'm quite busy until Wednesday.But today I have many time to study. because the yard manager went to official trip. and i finished urgent my team task yesterday.^ ^
>>>Since the manager went on a business trip and I finished my task yesterday, I have much time to study today!I'm sorry about i did a lot of composing today. and I expect you would understand me.
>>>Im sorry if I sent you lots of composition today, I really hope you would understand me.Have a nice day. See you tommorow.
>>>correct
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