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2014-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I was a fresh man as a CRA in local CRO, the study let me control stock of study drug. So if the site needs to be sent study drug in a short time, I had to call sponsor directly. But I could not meet the stock until patient’s visit date. The patient was visited to the site, there was no study drug to be provided. The study coordinator, a pharmacist and I were embarrassed deeply. I asked sponsor immediately for help as an emergency, then the study drug was delivered the day to the pharmacy from sponsor. Since the patient was gone to home, the pharmacist sent the study drug by using quick service. I tremble whenever I remember the day. I think it is the worst issue I’ve gotten. After that time, I do pay attention to monitoring at pharmacy.

강사 첨삭

Hello again [이름]!

Wow! You learned something from that incident. ^^
Great! All of the problems we encounter, we should take it as a challenge.

I believe that you are a strong person and you can deal with all of those things.

Thanks for letting me know you better. ^^

Teacher Nina

 

When I was a fresh man as a CRA in local CRO, the study let me control stock of study drug.

>> Did you mean: When I was a freshman as a CRA in local CRO, the task let me control the stocks of studying drugs.

So if the site needs to be sent study drug in a short time, I had to call sponsor directly.

>> So if the site needs the study drug to be sent in a short time, I had to directly call the sponsor.

But I could not meet the stock until patient’s visit date.

>> But I could not meet the stock until the patient\'s visit date.

The patient was visited to the site, there was no study drug to be provided.

>> The patient visited the site and there was no study drug provided.

>> OR: The patient will visit the site and there will be no study drug to be provided.

The study coordinator, a pharmacist and I were embarrassed deeply.

>> The study coordinator, a pharmacist and I were really embarrassed.

I asked sponsor immediately for help as an emergency, then the study drug was delivered the day to the pharmacy from sponsor.

>> I asked the sponsor immediately for help as an emergency, then the study drug was delivered that day to the pharmacy.

>> OR: I asked the sponsor immediately for help. Then, the study drug was delivered that day to the pharmacy from the sponsor.

Since the patient was gone to home, the pharmacist sent the study drug by using quick service.

>> Since the patient was already home, the pharmacist sent the study drug by using a quick service.

>> OR: Since the patient was already home, the pharmacist sent the study drug immediately.

I tremble whenever I remember the day.

>> Correct

I think it is the worst issue I’ve gotten.

>> Correct

>> OR: I think it was the worst issue that I encountered.

After that time, I do pay attention to monitoring at pharmacy.

>> After that time, I pay attention to the monitoring in the pharmacy.

>> OR: After that incident, I always pay attention in terms of monitoring in the pharmacy.

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