About my new house...

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I want to introduce my new house to teacher Charry. All the furniture came to our new house. I had very hard time on getting each furniture because we can\'t go bact to house during work to get furniture. If delivery man called to me to deliver furniture, I was always in the office. Anyway it\'s already finished!!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Congratulations on your newly furnished house!
I think it\'s more of a home now rather than a house. ^^

Enjoy your new home and your new furniture!
You deserve every single one of it because you\'ve worked hard for all of that.

I hope you\'re having a great evening.
See you again on Wednesday. ^_^
~Teacher Charry :*


I want to introduce my new house to teacher Charry.

>> I want to introduce my new house to Teacher Charry.

All the furniture came to our new house.

>> CORRECT!

I had very hard time on getting each furniture because we can\'t go bact to house during work to get furniture.

>> I had a very hard time on getting each furniture because we can\'t go back to our house during work to get them.

If delivery man called to me to deliver furniture, I was always in the office.

>> If the delivery man called to me to deliver the furniture, I was always in the office.

Anyway it\'s already finished!!

>> Anyway it\'s already finished!

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