About my new house...
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Congratulations on your newly furnished house!
I think it\'s more of a home now rather than a house. ^^
Enjoy your new home and your new furniture!
You deserve every single one of it because you\'ve worked hard for all of that.
I hope you\'re having a great evening.
See you again on Wednesday. ^_^
~Teacher Charry :*
I want to introduce my new house to teacher Charry.
>> I want to introduce my new house to Teacher Charry.
All the furniture came to our new house.
>> CORRECT!
I had very hard time on getting each furniture because we can\'t go bact to house during work to get furniture.
>> I had a very hard time on getting each furniture because we can\'t go back to our house during work to get them.
If delivery man called to me to deliver furniture, I was always in the office.
>> If the delivery man called to me to deliver the furniture, I was always in the office.
Anyway it\'s already finished!!
>> Anyway it\'s already finished!
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