About my personality
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
I always t[이름]k you for your support.
I was always scared to something new or make a small c[이름]ge in my life. Of course I have overcome it to some degree through military and work life. No, I think I am pretending not to be afraid. So I want to have a spirit of challenge. Also, I thought I have a lot of angry was a drawback, but now I think it is necessary for working, because it protects me.
Do you have a personality that you want to c[이름]ge?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ho! Your question made me think too. I hope you will keep on fighting and will never give up.
Until the next one!
See you in class on Monday!
~Teacher Sheila
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I was always scared to something new or make a small c[이름]ge in my life.
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Of course I have overcome it to some degree through military and work life.
>>Of course, I have overcome it to some degrees through military and work life.
No, I think I am pretending not to be afraid.
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So I want to have a spirit of challenge.
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Also, I thought I have a lot of angry was a drawback, but now I think it is necessary for working, because it protects me.
>>Also, I thought I have a lot of anger and drawback but now I think, it is necessary for work because it protects me.
Do you have a personality that you want to c[이름]ge?
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ANSWER>> I do want to c[이름]ge my ways of dealing problems. I often get angry first at the person or at the situation before I try to solve problems. I want to be better at dealing these things.
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