About my pleasant shopping experience.
학생이 쓴 원문
A pleasant shopping experience for me is buying rings with friends. We bought and wore rings of the same design, different colors. The ring is still in my treasure chest.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
A pleasant shopping experience for me is buying rings with friends.
>>> CORRECT!
We bought and wore rings of the same design, different colors.
>>> We bought and wore rings of the same design, in different colors.
The ring is still in my treasure chest.
>>> CORRECT!
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