About My self

2010-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

My name is [Name]-[이름]. I'm a senior. My major is economics. But It's not interesting to me. I like watch the perpomances. Modern Dance, Play, classic concert and so on.. Classic plays are both interesting and instructive. And I enjoy the imagination & make an interpretation that when I what the modern dance. I want to be a flight attendant.Because it's a good chance to international manner & sence. And can travle many contries. that's why l learnning English speaking.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ji Ho!!! Thank you for passing a composition today!!! Your sentences are good but I did revisions. Please be careful of the spelling of words as well as the punctuation marks. Keep on passing compositions to practice your sentence construction and grammar. Keep it up girl!!! See you later!!!Lei J   My name is [Name]-[이름]. >>correctI'm a senior. >>correct My major is economics.>>correct >>I major in Economics But It's not interesting to me.>>correct >>But I don't find it interesting (better) I like watch the perpomances.>>I like watching performances Modern Dance, Play, classic concert and so on..>>correct Classic plays are both interesting and instructive.>>correct And I enjoy the imagination & make an interpretation that when I what the modern dance.>>And I enjoy working with my imagination and interpreting that as a modern dance. I want to be a flight attendant. >>correct Because it's a good chance to international manner & sence. >>Because it is a good chance to enjoy international sceneries And can travle many contries.>>and I can travel to many countries that's why l learnning English speaking. >>that's why I wanted to learn English and improve my speaking skills.

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