About my studying method for English
학생이 쓴 원문
Today topic is "How will I celebrate valentine's day."
But I don't have a boyfriend. And also, I don't want to talk about this.
Accordingly,I changed topic which is my studying method for English.
Nowadays, I am listening a radio which is Good Morning Pops.
I can learn very useful sentences and also I am likely to listen to it whenever and wherever by a smartphone.
And I am trying to modify my broken English by Power English.
I can check what is my faults and also it's really fun.
After starting new semester, I am going to read a english newpaper.
And I will be having a meal with a international professer every weeks.
It will be helpful for my english skill.
Carly, I have a sad news.
I can join our happy call by today. It is because I want to change the time from night time to morning time. I hope to have a call someday. I will change my teacher regularly for listening to various accents. So I think we can meet someday again. It was happy time and God bless you.:)
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji [이름]! ^^, Your composition is good and your strategy is also good. It\'s good that you would try different teachers so you could listen to different accents and I am proud of you that you are starting to listen to English programs and even reading English newspaper. Your composition is good but a little practice on your articles. Remember that is a word starts with a vowel, then we use the article \'an\' before the word. For example; \'an international professor\' or \'an English newspaper\'. I\'ll see you in class later! ^^,
-Teacher Carly-
Today topic is \"How will I celebrate valentine\'s day.\"
>> Today\'s topic is \"How will I celebrate valentine\'s day.\"
>>OR The topic for today is \"How will I celebrate valentine\'s day.\"But I don\'t have a boyfriend.
>>CORRECT
And also, I don\'t want to talk about this.
>>CORRECTAccordingly, I changed topic which is my studying method for English.
>>CORRECTNowadays, I am listening a radio which is Good Morning Pops.
>> Nowadays, I am listening to a radio program which is Good Morning Pops.I can learn very useful sentences and also I am likely to listen to it whenever and wherever by a smartphone.
>>CORRECTAnd I am trying to modify my broken English by Power English.
>>CORRECTI can check what is my faults and also it\'s really fun.
>> I can check what are my faults and also it\'s really fun.After starting new semester, I am going to read a english newpaper.
>> After starting new semester, I am going to read an English newspaper.And I will be having a meal with a international professer every weeks.
>> And I will be having a meal with an international professor every week.It will be helpful for my english skill.>> It will be helpful for my English skill.Carly, I have a sad news.
>>CORRECTI can join our happy call by today.
>>CORRECT
It is because I want to change the time from night time to morning time.
>>CORRECT
I hope to have a call someday.
>>CORRECT
I will change my teacher regularly for listening to various accents.
>> I will change my teacher regularly so I can listen to various accents.
So I think we can meet someday again.
>>CORRECT
It was happy time and God bless you.:)
>>I had a happy time with you and God bless you.
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