About my studying method for English

2012-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Today topic is "How will I celebrate valentine's day." But I don't have a boyfriend. And also, I don't want to talk about this. Accordingly,I changed topic which is my studying method for English. Nowadays, I am listening a radio which is Good Morning Pops. I can learn very useful sentences and also I am likely to listen to it whenever and wherever by a smartphone. And I am trying to modify my broken English by Power English. I can check what is my faults and also it's really fun. After starting new semester, I am going to read a english newpaper. And I will be having a meal with a international professer every weeks. It will be helpful for my english skill. Carly, I have a sad news. I can join our happy call by today. It is because I want to change the time from night time to morning time. I hope to have a call someday. I will change my teacher regularly for listening to various accents. So I think we can meet someday again. It was happy time and God bless you.:)

강사 첨삭

Hi Ji [이름]! ^^, Your composition is good and your strategy is also good. It\'s good that you would try different teachers so you could listen to different accents and I am proud of you that you are starting to listen to English programs and even reading English newspaper. Your composition is good but a little practice on your articles. Remember that is a word starts with a vowel, then we use the article \'an\' before the word. For example; \'an international professor\' or \'an English newspaper\'. I\'ll see you in class later! ^^, -Teacher Carly- Today topic is \"How will I celebrate valentine\'s day.\" >> Today\'s topic is \"How will I celebrate valentine\'s day.\" >>OR The topic for today is \"How will I celebrate valentine\'s day.\"But I don\'t have a boyfriend. >>CORRECT And also, I don\'t want to talk about this. >>CORRECTAccordingly, I changed topic which is my studying method for English. >>CORRECTNowadays, I am listening a radio which is Good Morning Pops. >> Nowadays, I am listening to a radio program which is Good Morning Pops.I can learn very useful sentences and also I am likely to listen to it whenever and wherever by a smartphone. >>CORRECTAnd I am trying to modify my broken English by Power English. >>CORRECTI can check what is my faults and also it\'s really fun. >> I can check what are my faults and also it\'s really fun.After starting new semester, I am going to read a english newpaper. >> After starting new semester, I am going to read an English newspaper.And I will be having a meal with a international professer every weeks. >> And I will be having a meal with an international professor every week.It will be helpful for my english skill.>> It will be helpful for my English skill.Carly, I have a sad news. >>CORRECTI can join our happy call by today. >>CORRECT It is because I want to change the time from night time to morning time. >>CORRECT I hope to have a call someday. >>CORRECT I will change my teacher regularly for listening to various accents. >> I will change my teacher regularly so I can listen to various accents. So I think we can meet someday again. >>CORRECT It was happy time and God bless you.:) >>I had a happy time with you and God bless you.  

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