About my think of Television.
학생이 쓴 원문
When you think of \'TV\', a certain happy and joyful image comes to mind. The great thing about television is that you can watch what you like out big or enjoy it with the whole family. The bad thing is that you become addicted to television and watch it all day long.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
When you think of \'TV\', a certain happy and joyful image comes to mind.
>>> CORRECT!
The great thing about television is that you can watch what you like out big or enjoy it with the whole family.
>>> CORRECT!
The bad thing is that you become addicted to television and watch it all day long.
>>> CORRECT!
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