About my times
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t use my time wisely.
There are times when you make plans and implement them. However, most of the time, I tend to work without being late for the deadline. I keep my appointment well, but I don\'t use my time effectively.
I think this kind of habit should be corrected. I think it\'s right to use your time systematically and effectively to do more work efficiently.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Hazel! ^^
I loved reading your sentences today.
I loved reading your sentences today.
You have made great complex sentences.
Keep it up!
- T. Rina
1. I don\'t use my time wisely.
>> CORRECT!
2. There are times when you make plans and implement them.
>> CORRECT!
3. However, most of the time, I tend to work without being late for the deadline.
>> CORRECT!
4. I keep my appointment well, but I don\'t use my time effectively.
>> CORRECT!
5. I think this kind of habit should be corrected.
>> CORRECT!
6. I think it\'s right to use your time systematically and effectively to do more work efficiently.
>> CORRECT!
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