About my travel.

Hi CAM! Before class, I thought my description caught short! So, I'll explain a little my travel. : D I'll travel around my country by bicycle on August. My travel's goal is not simple self-satisfation, but my second dream! kkk My second dream is that I'll be one who help making peaceable and warm world. So I'll plan to raise funds from some company's sponsor or fund-raising campaign by this traveling. And I'll buy bicycle for many hard children by these money which be given by many people who is impressed with my traveling or some company. Because the bicycle is very good way to make broad realization about the world. At least, I want many children to grow up in same situation not inequality, when they are just in childhood~~~~.

Hello my dear [이름]! Good job! I always appreciate you making a composition. And you know what? You impressed me a lot because your dream is not just for you but for other people aswell.. Reach for your dreams baby, I know you can co it because you are a kind hearted person..^.^ Take care always and have a good day baby.. xoxoTEacher Cam^^ Hi CAM! Before class, I thought my description caught short! >>On our previous class, I thought my explanation was short.So, I\'ll explain a little my travel. : D>>So I\'llexplain a little about my travel/trip.:DI\'ll travel around my country by bicycle on August. >>correctMy travel\'s goal is not simple self-satisfation, but my second dream! kkk >>My goal is not just self satisfaction, but also reaching my dream!:)My second dream is that I\'ll be one who help making peaceable and warm world.>>My second dream is for me to help and make a peaceful and warm world. So I\'ll plan to raise funds from some company\'s sponsor or fund-raising campaign by this traveling. >>So I\'m planning to raise some funds from different companies and fund raising xampaign by this travel.  And I\'ll buy bicycle for many hard children by these money which be given by many people who is impressed with my traveling or some company.>>I\'ll buy some bicycles for less fortunate children using these money which will be given by many people or companies who will be impressed by my trip.Because the bicycle is very good way to make broad realization about the world.>>correctAt least, I want many children to grow up in same situation not inequality, when they are just in childhood~~~~. >>Atleast I want many children to grow up in equality.