About my wishes
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
Happy Tuesday.
My wish is that I want to win the lottery. I want to live to don\'t worry about the money. I have worked for the money, so I am getting tired. I want to just enjoy my life. Because I need a lot of money, I want to win the lottery.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Ho! Your sentences greatly improved today! Keep it up!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
My wish is that I want to win the lottery.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My wish is to win the lottery.
I want to live to don\'t worry about the money.
>>I want to live not worrying about money.
I have worked for the money, so I am getting tired.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I am working for the money and I am getting tired.
I want to just enjoy my life.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I just want to enjoy life.
Because I need a lot of money, I want to win the lottery.
>>CORRECT
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