About myself
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow, I can\'t remember when I was given these type of question. I\'m so glad because I think everybody want to be given interest and want to talk about themselves. I always want to be alone but want to be in the middle of people at the same time. It means I\'d like to share each other\'s thoughts, feelings, experiences and interests with respect. I know that I\'m quite susceptable and it gives distress to someone and hurts myself. So I\'m finding the people who have similar degree of susceptable, consideration and same grain of emotions. These are the things about myself what I felt today. I\'ll be pleased if I could know about you so please talk to me about yourself if you want.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Su [이름]! ^^
I appreciate you for telling me about yourself.
Thank you for asking me as well. As for me, I\'m a person who also values my personal space. I usually prefer to just stay at home most of the time. But I also love going out with my friends and have a chit-chat with them. I think I\'m really not an outgoing person but I still like meeting and knowing other people. I always try to go outside my comfort zone and interact with others. So far, I think, I\'m getting used to it and it\'s really awesome since I get to learn a lot from them especially about life. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Wow, I can\'t remember when I was given these type of question. I\'m so glad because I think everybody wants to be given an interest and want to talk about themselves. I always want to be alone but want to be in the middle of people at the same time. It means that I\'d like to share my thoughts, feelings, experiences and interests with respect to others and vice versa. I know that I\'m quite susceptible and it gives distress to someone and it also hurts myself. So I\'m finding people who have similar degree of susceptibility, consideration and same grain of emotions as me. These are the things about myself and of what I felt today. I\'ll be pleased if I could know about you so please talk to me about yourself if you want.
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