About North Korea and South Korea's relationship

Korea is the speacial country in the world since Korea is the only divided country as North Korea and South Korea. Both of them want a unification. But they have a difference of view. North Korea wants a unification under communism and South Korea wants a peaceful unification. That's reason we can't unify. I want to talk to you a unusual story. I lived in dorm with two chiness last year. One friend told me this. "If I had had a experience traveling South Korea, I could't have gone trip to North Korea." I guess it is because powerful mans don't want people to know South Korean being well. After war, North Korea's wealth is better than South Korea. But that's not corrct now. Anyway, I know the unification has a lot of disadventage but the unification also has more adventage. So I want this comes true someday.

Hi Ji [이름]! ^^, You have a very nice composition. I do agree with peace and unity so I think it\'s time to think about the future and try to forgive whatever came between North and South Korea. But as people say, there is a right time for everything. Your ideas are actually good and I like them, just be careful with your spelling and your articles. I\'ll see you in class later! ^^, -Teacher Carly-   Korea is the speacial country in the world since Korea is the only divided country as North Korea and South Korea. >> Korea is a special country in the world since Korea is the only divided country in to North Korea and South Korea. Both of them want a unification. >> Both of them want unification. But they have a difference of view. >> But they have a different view. North Korea wants a unification under communism and South Korea wants a peaceful unification. >> North Korea wants unification under communism and South Korea wants a peaceful unification. That\'s reason we can\'t unify. >> That\'s the reason we can\'t unify.I want to talk to you a unusual story. >> I want to talk to you an unusual story. I lived in dorm with two chiness last year. >> I lived in dorm with two Chinese last year. One friend told me this. >>CORRECT \"If I had had a experience traveling South Korea, I could\'t have gone trip to North Korea.\' >>\"If I experience traveling to South Korea, I could have gone to a trip to North Korea.\' I guess it is because powerful mans don\'t want people to know South Korean being well. >> I guess it is because powerful men don\'t want people to know South Korean being well. After war, North Korea\'s wealth is better than South Korea. >>CORRECT But that\'s not corrct now. >>But that\'s not true now.Anyway, I know the unification has a lot of disadventage but the unification also has more adventage. >> Anyway, I know the unification has a lot of disadvantages but the unification also has more advantages.So I want this comes true someday. >> So I want this to come true someday.