about of my favorite soccer player
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite soccer player is Lional Messi
The Messi have so many achievements.
First, he is a best soccer player of 21st century
Second, he has very many crape
Third, he has a very many trophy
Finally, he always winning in his game
강사 첨삭
My favorite soccer player is Lional Messi
The Messi have so many achievements.
First, he is a best soccer player of 21st century
Second, he has very many crape
Third, he has a very many trophy
Finally, he always winning in his game
>> My favorite soccer player is Lionel Messi.
The Messi have so many achievements.
>> Messi has so many achievements.
First, he is a best soccer player of 21st century
>> First, he is the best soccer player of the 21st century.
Second, he has very many crape
>> What do you mean by crape?
Third, he has a very many trophy
>> Third, he has many trophies.
Finally, he always winning in his game
>> Finally, he always wins in his games.
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