About Our government
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
Our government limited a few things to control the spread of the virus. First, people were put on masks. Second, people had to keep a distance each other. The virus was shrinking, but it spread rapidly over the holiday season. So recently, they suggested that shops like chain cafe, PC rooms, singing rooms shut down. But the virus was not controlled. I am worried about the virus.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] Ho! This virus has been affecting people all over the world which we are required to sacrifice a lot of things.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>Our government put limitations to a few things to control the spread of the virus.
First, people were put on masks.
>>First, people have to wear a mask.
OR>>First, people are to wear a mask.
Second, people had to keep a distance each other.
>>Second, people had to keep a distance to each other.
OR>>Second, people should follow the social distancing rule.
The virus was shrinking, but it spread rapidly over the holiday season.
>>CORRECT
So recently, they suggested that shops like chain cafe, PC rooms, singing rooms shut down.
>>So recently, they suggested that shops like chain cafe, PC rooms, and singing rooms should be shut down.
But the virus was not controlled.
>>CORRECT
I am worried about the virus.
>>CORRECT
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