About our traditional technology
학생이 쓴 원문
Talk about a traditional product (e.g. food, handicraft…) from your local region.
What it is
What it is like
How it is made
And explain why it is popular.
Let me tell you about our traditional architectural technology. Thanks to our ascent people’s wisdom, our house are designated to build with natural materials such as soil, woods, straws and so on and to fit around environment. All shapes were from natural spline. So that it is well known for harmony with our nature and eco centered design.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you very much.
-T. James-
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Thanks to our ascent people’s wisdom, our house are designated to build with natural materials such as soil, woods, straws and so on and to fit around environment.
>>Thanks to our ancestor\'s wisdom, our houses are built with natural materials such as soil, wood, straws, and so on to fit in the environment.
All shapes were from natural spline.
>>All the shapes were from the natural spline.
So that it is well known for harmony with our nature and eco centered design.
>>So that it will be well-known and it will be nature-centered.
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