About primary responsibility
학생이 쓴 원문
Parents don't have primary responsibility. Because that kind of
incident is a very natural phenomenon. That kind of conflict make
student stronger. Thay have to overcome that kind of problem not
parents.If parents involve in that situation their child became
weaker and weaker.
강사 첨삭
Hello,
Thank you so much for sending me this one ^--^ I agree with you students must learn how to be independent J
See you in class
Teacher May. Parents don't have primary responsibility. Because that kind of >> Parents are not primarily responsible in that incident because it incident is a very natural phenomenon. That kind of conflict make>> is a very natural situation. That kind of conflict will make the student stronger. student stronger. Thay have to overcome that kind of problem not >> They have to overcome that problem by themselves without there parents. parents.If parents involve in that situation their child became weaker and weaker.>> If parents will be involved the student will become very dependent and they won't learn to be stronger.
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