About reading

2012-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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When I was young, I hate to read a book because I like to play with my friends. However with age, I realize the importance of reading. One who have read lots of books is different to talking and thinking. So, I decide to read many books as possible as I can. But, It still difficult to me. Especially I feel hard to make it habituation. Although sometimes I still sleeping by reading(OMG), I have to read many books because of my growth.

강사 첨삭

Wow! That is a very good thing you do my dear Kevib! Its always nice to read books for your development and Im proud of you because you always d your best in reading.. Keep up the good work baby.. Anyway, I\'ll be calling you again tomorrow and have a good day my dear [이름].. Take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ When I was young, I hate to read a book because I like to play with my friends. >>correct >>When I was young, I hate reading books because I would prefer to play with my friends.However with age, I realize the importance of reading. >>correct One who have read lots of books is different to talking and thinking. >>Someone who reads a lot, has different point of view in terms of speaking and thinking. So, I decide to read many books as possible as I can. >>correct >>So Ive decided to read many books as many as I can. But, It still difficult to me. >>But it is still very difficult for me. Especially I feel hard to make it habituation. >>Especially I feel difficult to make it a habit. >>I\'m having a hard time making it a habit. Although sometimes I still sleeping by reading(OMG), I have to read many books because of my growth. >>Although sometimes I still fall asleep while reading, I have to read many books for my growth and development.

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