About reading
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I hate to read a book because I like to play with my friends.
However with age, I realize the importance of reading. One who have read lots of books is different to talking and thinking. So, I decide to read many books as possible as I can. But, It still difficult to me. Especially I feel hard to make it habituation. Although sometimes I still sleeping by reading(OMG), I have to read many books because of my growth.
강사 첨삭
Wow! That is a very good thing you do my dear Kevib!
Its always nice to read books for your development and Im proud of you because you always d your best in reading..
Keep up the good work baby..
Anyway, I\'ll be calling you again tomorrow and have a good day my dear [이름]..
Take care always..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
When I was young, I hate to read a book because I like to play with my friends.
>>correct
>>When I was young, I hate reading books because I would prefer to play with my friends.However with age, I realize the importance of reading.
>>correct
One who have read lots of books is different to talking and thinking.
>>Someone who reads a lot, has different point of view in terms of speaking and thinking.
So, I decide to read many books as possible as I can.
>>correct
>>So Ive decided to read many books as many as I can.
But, It still difficult to me.
>>But it is still very difficult for me.
Especially I feel hard to make it habituation.
>>Especially I feel difficult to make it a habit.
>>I\'m having a hard time making it a habit.
Although sometimes I still sleeping by reading(OMG), I have to read many books because of my growth.
>>Although sometimes I still fall asleep while reading, I have to read many books for my growth and development.
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