about RUDE ACTION

2012-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Sometimes we meet one who behavior rude action or talking. Although the standard of rudeness is different each country, I think that basic manners or etiquette have to be necessary in any place. Especially public places is used by many citizen. So whoever is there, don't make rudeness. For keeping manners or etiquette, we respect other's pure freedom and culture.

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Wow! Thats pretty amazing baby!! Keep up the good work.. Its good that you are keeping track of your studies and I always appreciate you for doing that baby By the way, just enjoy your weekend my dear.. Have a great weekend.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Sometimes we meet one who behavior rude action or talking. >>Sometimes we encounter people with bad behavior, it might be thru action or words.Although the standard of rudeness is different each country, I think that basic manners or etiquette have to be necessary in any place.>>Although the standard of being rude is different from each country, I think the basic manners or etiquette have to be necessary anywhere. Especially public places is used by many citizen. >>correct So whoever is there, don\'t make rudeness.>>So whoever is there shouldnt be rude.For keeping manners or etiquette, we respect other\'s pure freedom and culture. >>correct

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