About self-esteem

2021-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I think the most important thing to grow self-esteem correctly is that you must not compare yourself to others. Young kids are tend to compare to others and lower themselves. Actually, when I was in kindergarden, I have thaught that I don’t have what I can do well. However, as I grew up I realize value of my abilities and also I can develop my self-esteem. So, I hope that many young girls who doesn’t have right self-esteem can cherish their ablilty of themselves and realize value of abilities.

강사 첨삭

Hi, A-Rim! Thank you for this wonderful answer. I totally agree with you! I am glad that you found your value and that you cherish your abilities because they can surely help build you up and the people around you, too. Great job! 

~ Teacher Marie   

I think the most important thing to grow self-esteem correctly is that you must not compare yourself to others.

>> I think the most important thing in improving self-esteem correctly is not comparing yourself to others.

Young kids are tend to compare to others and lower themselves.

>> Young kids tend to compare themselves to other and feel inferior.

Actually, when I was in kindergarden, I have thaught that I don’t have what I can do well.

>> Actually, when was in kindergarten, I thought that there was nothing I can do well.

However, as I grew up I realize value of my abilities and also I can develop my self-esteem.

>> However, as I grew up, I realized my value and abilities and I also developed my self-esteem. 

So, I hope that many young girls who doesn’t have right self-esteem can cherish their ablilty of themselves and realize value of abilities.

>> So, I hope that many young girls who don\'t have the right self-esteem can cherish their abiities and realize their value.



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