About shopping
학생이 쓴 원문
I like shopping. In usually I buy clothes. Because I love matching clothes.
I enjoy making my own fashion.
And I looking for many clothes at online.
And I buy some food ingredients. Cooking is also my happiness.
I usually cook many kind of soup. I\'m not great cook, but I try to learn for cooking everyday.
My small dream is that share my food for my community member.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. I hope that you\'ll achieve your dream soon! :)
- T.Gabby :)
I like shopping.
>> Correct.
In usually I buy clothes. Because I love matching clothes.
>> I usually buy my clothes because I love matching clothes.
I enjoy making my own fashion.
>> Correct.
And I looking for many clothes at online.
And I looking for many clothes at online.
>> And I look at many clothes online.
And I buy some food ingredients.
And I buy some food ingredients.
>> Correct.
Cooking is also my happiness.
>> Correct.
I usually cook many kind of soup.
I usually cook many kind of soup.
>> I usually cook many kinds of soup.
I\'m not great cook, but I try to learn for cooking everyday.
>> I\'m not a great cook, but I try to learn cooking everyday.
My small dream is that share my food for my community member.
My small dream is that share my food for my community member.
>> My small dream is to share my food to the community.
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