about Spanish and language(half paragraph)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi guys This is [Name]^_^
Today, I\'m going to talk about language
Especially! I\'m gonna focus on the Spanish that I\'m learning now days
As I said earlier, I postponed university enrollment due to Corona 19, having around a year and half free time, I wanted to learn something during that time
I thought it might be okay to learn another language because I’ve wanted to speak many languages learning English and Japanese
and that\'s how I started learning Spanish
Many people asked \"Why do you learn Spanish among all the other languages?\"
First of all, I wanted to learn a language which is used by many people and fundamental
For that reason, many people recommended Chinese to me
However, I originally have not liked Chinese characters, and learning Japanese, I had hated Chinese characters even more
So the Chinese naturally moved away from me^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Ju!
I have tried my best to make the sentences lighter and more appropriate for your video.
We can practice how you say them in class.
You have such good content.
Send me the others next time.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Hi guys
>> Hi guys!
This is [Name]^_^
>> This is [Name]!
Today, I\'m going to talk about language
Today, I\'m going to talk about language
>> Today, I\'m going to talk about languages.
Especially! I\'m gonna focus on the Spanish that I\'m learning now days
Especially! I\'m gonna focus on the Spanish that I\'m learning now days
>> I especially want to focus on the language that I\'m learning nowadays which is Spanish.
As I said earlier, I postponed university enrollment due to Corona 19, having around a year and half free time, I wanted to learn something during that time
As I said earlier, I postponed university enrollment due to Corona 19, having around a year and half free time, I wanted to learn something during that time
>> As I said earlier, I put my enrollment to the university on hold because of COVID 19.
having around a year and half free time, I wanted to learn something during that time
>> Because I have around a year and a half of free time, I decided to learn something new.
I thought it might be okay to learn another language because I’ve wanted to speak many languages learning English and Japanese
>> I thought it might be good to learn another language because I’ve always wanted to be multilingual.
and that\'s how I started learning Spanish
and that\'s how I started learning Spanish
>> First, I wanted to learn English and Japanese and now, I have moved on to Spanish.
Many people asked \"Why do you learn Spanish among all the other languages?\"
Many people asked \"Why do you learn Spanish among all the other languages?\"
>> Many people had wondered why I wanted to learn Spanish considering that there are lots of languages out there.
First of all, I wanted to learn a language which is used by many people and fundamental
>> First of all, I wanted to learn a language which is used by many people and is considered fundamental.
For that reason, many people recommended Chinese to me
For that reason, many people recommended Chinese to me
>> With that reason in mind, many people suggested that I try to learn Chinese.
However, I originally have not liked Chinese characters, and learning Japanese, I had hated Chinese characters even more
However, I originally have not liked Chinese characters, and learning Japanese, I had hated Chinese characters even more
>> However, I initially disliked Chinese characters, and after I started learning Japanese, I had hated Chinese characters even more.
So the Chinese naturally moved away from me^^
So the Chinese naturally moved away from me^^
>> So, I naturally gave up on learning English.
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