about spank
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Jessie~
I'm doing homework in my office. Today is very free.^^
I accept to spank.
I will accept my parents to spank my child.
Because As a child I was mischief girl.
My parent spanked to me.
But Their love me. It's not punishment.
If child fight with friend. Parents demand slapped skin for their children.
Then children shouid select to slapped number.
At this time child will realize the wrong thing is bad.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks you for sharing your opinion about this.
I agree with some of your ideas.
I believe that our parents spank us because they want to discipline us because they love us.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello. Jessie~
>> Correct!
I\'m doing homework in my office.
>> I\'m doing my homework in my office.
Today is very free.^^
>> Correct!
I accept to spank.
>> For me, spanking is acceptable.
I will accept my parents to spank my child.
>> Correct!
Because As a child I was mischief girl.
>> Because when I was a child, I was a mischievous girl.
My parent spanked to me.
>> My parents spanked me.
But Their love me.
>> But it\'s because of their love for me.
It\'s not punishment.
>> Correct!
If child fight with friend.
>> If a child fights with a friend.
Parents demand slapped skin for their children.
>> Parents demand to slap their children.
Then children shouid select to slapped number.
>> Then children should select the number of spanks.
At this time child will realize the wrong thing is bad.
>> At this time a child will realize that the wrong things are bad.
Thanks you for sharing your opinion about this.
I agree with some of your ideas.
I believe that our parents spank us because they want to discipline us because they love us.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello. Jessie~
>> Correct!
I\'m doing homework in my office.
>> I\'m doing my homework in my office.
Today is very free.^^
>> Correct!
I accept to spank.
>> For me, spanking is acceptable.
I will accept my parents to spank my child.
>> Correct!
Because As a child I was mischief girl.
>> Because when I was a child, I was a mischievous girl.
My parent spanked to me.
>> My parents spanked me.
But Their love me.
>> But it\'s because of their love for me.
It\'s not punishment.
>> Correct!
If child fight with friend.
>> If a child fights with a friend.
Parents demand slapped skin for their children.
>> Parents demand to slap their children.
Then children shouid select to slapped number.
>> Then children should select the number of spanks.
At this time child will realize the wrong thing is bad.
>> At this time a child will realize that the wrong things are bad.
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