about spending time with others
학생이 쓴 원문
3. Would you prefer to study alone or with others?
It hard to choose only one, I used to mix both. Usually I do studying alone first and tutoring each other with my friends. This is a good way to supplement each other\'s knowledge while studying and not lose concentration when studying alone.
4. Do you remember a time when you need to cooperate with others?
When I work part-time job, even yesterday, I need to work together with the staff for offer better services. It’s not easy always but luckily my team considerate to me so I try to be like them.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Alice!
Your answers are very substantial and the sentences have a few grammar mistakes. Go over the sentence patterns that I suggested and memorize the correct ways to create sentences with them.
Excellent job!
See you next week.
-T. Donna =)
3. Would you prefer to study alone or with others?
It hard to choose only one, I used to mix both. >> Correct!
Or: Choosing one is difficult since I am used to them both.
Usually I do studying alone first and tutoring each other with my friends.
>> Correct!
Or: Usually, I study alone first and we tutor each other with my friends.
This is a good way to supplement each other\'s knowledge while studying and not lose concentration when studying alone.
>> Correct! (Very good sentence!)
4. Do you remember a time when you need to cooperate with others?
When I work part-time job, even yesterday, I need to work together with the staff for offer better services.
4. Do you remember a time when you need to cooperate with others?
When I work part-time job, even yesterday, I need to work together with the staff for offer better services.
>> When I work with my part-time job, even yesterday, I needed to work together with the staff to offer better services.
It’s not easy always but luckily my team considerate to me so I try to be like them.
>> It’s not easy always but luckily my team is considerate to me so I try to be like them.
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