About sports
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What do you think of doing sports as a hobby?
I liked to do muscle exercise at the fitness center when i was young.
I did many muscle exercise at 25 years old.
Now, i don\'t do it. Because, it is hard.
Every sports is very important for our body and our mind. We always saw various kinds of sports. For example, muscle exercise, exercise of arms, baseball, basketball, swimming, yoga, take a walk, running and meditation.
Thease days, i\'m doing take a walk , exercise of arms and meditation.
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Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I liked to do muscle exercise at the fitness center when i was young.
>>> correct
I did many muscle exercise at 25 years old.
I did many muscle exercise at 25 years old.
>>> correct
Now, i don\'t do it. Because, it is hard.
>>> I don\'t do it now because it is hard.
Every sports is very important for our body and our mind.
Now, i don\'t do it. Because, it is hard.
>>> I don\'t do it now because it is hard.
Every sports is very important for our body and our mind.
>>> Every sport is very important for our body and our mind.
We always saw various kinds of sports.
>>> We always see various kinds of sports.
For example, muscle exercise, exercise of arms, baseball, basketball, swimming, yoga, take a walk, running and meditation.
>>> correct
Thease days, i\'m doing take a walk , exercise of arms and meditation.
Thease days, i\'m doing take a walk , exercise of arms and meditation.
>>> These days, I\'m doing taking a walk, exercise for arms and meditation.
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