About spring season
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you enjoy about spring season?
I enjoy a kind of many thing in spring season.
For example,
I enjoy watching a kind of different birds, beautiful flowers, green Mountain and
blue sky. And, I have feel bit warm Wind. And
I enjoy drinking coffee or tea with my wife and two sons in spring season.
I take a work with my family while talking about our daily life.
Spring season is beautiful and good season.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I enjoy a kind of many thing in spring season.
>>> I enjoy many kind of things in spring season.
For example, I enjoy watching a kind of different birds, beautiful flowers, green Mountain and blue sky.
For example, I enjoy watching a kind of different birds, beautiful flowers, green Mountain and blue sky.
>>> For example, I enjoy watching some kinds of different birds, beautiful flowers, green mountain and the blue sky.
And, I have feel bit warm Wind.
>>> In addition, I can feel the warm breeze of wind.
And I enjoy drinking coffee or tea with my wife and two sons in spring season.
>>> I also enjoy drinking coffee or tea with my wife and two sons in spring season.
I take a work with my family while talking about our daily life.
I take a work with my family while talking about our daily life.
>>> I take a walk with my family while talking about our daily life.
Spring season is beautiful and good season.
Spring season is beautiful and good season.
>>> Spring season is a beautiful and good season.
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