About super power

2021-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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I have thought that if I have super powers before. It’s so interesting but It can’t be true. So I sometimes feel sad. However If I could super power that can stop time, I will do every household chores including mopping the house. Be honest, I want to stop time and sleep whole day but If it comes really true, I will do my best on household chores.

강사 첨삭

Hello Arim!

I am grateful to read your homework.  Keep it up! :)

-T. Maine


I have thought that if I have super powers before.

>>I have thought this before.

It’s so interesting but It can’t be true.

>>It\'s so interesting, but it can\'t be true.

So I sometimes feel sad.

>>Correct!

However If I could super power that can stop time, I will do every household chores including mopping the house.

>>However, if I could have super powers that could stop time, I would do every household chores including mopping the floor.

Be honest, I want to stop time and sleep whole day but If it comes really true, I will do my best on household chores.

>>To be honest, I want to stop time and slee the whole day, but if it comes really true I will do my best on the household chores.

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