About tattoos
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
I don\'t like tattoo and will not get a tattoo. Because people who have tattoos get tattoos to intimidate in Korea. Of course it is not these days, but when I was young, I saw that people.
I think People who have many tattoos for the art can be beautiful.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ho! T[이름]k you for sharing your opinions and insights about the topic.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>i don\'t like tattoos and will not get a tattoo.
Because people who have tattoos get tattoos to intimidate in Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Because people get tattoos because they want to intimidate people in Korea.
Of course it is not these days, but when I was young, I saw that people.
>>Of course, it is not the case these days but, when I was young, I saw those people.
I think People who have many tattoos for the art can be beautiful.
>>I think people who have many tattoos for art can be beautiful.
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