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2010-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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I like so many different aspects of teaching, but the one that stands out the most is when I see students pay attention to me strongly and study hard. I feel they are believing in and relying on me. I'm so satisfied with that. The thougts I can lead these students to a right way and raise them make me so happy and give me an energy to teach. I have strong responsibility but teaching someone is very attractive job. The dislike point is just I have to go same place 'a school' to work for my life time. If I'm a flight attendant, I can go around the world, but teacher always have to go to school. However, it doesn't matter that much. I can have positive thinking I can go to work many different diverse schools than anyone else.

강사 첨삭

I like so many different aspects of teaching, but the one that stands out the most is when I see students pay attention to me strongly and study hard.

>> I like the different joys of teaching,, but one that stands out the most is when I see my students paying attention and studying hard.

I feel they are believing in and relying on me.

>> I feel that they are and relying on me.

I'm so satisfied with that.

>>Correct.

The thougts I can lead these students to a right way and raise them make me so happy and give me an energy to teach.

>>> The thought that I can lead these students to the right direction and rear them makes me so happy and gives me energy to teach.

I have strong responsibility but teaching someone is very attractive job.

>> I have a strong sense of responsibility but teaching someone is a very attractive job.

The dislike point is just I have to go same place 'a school' to work for my life time.

>> The aspect I dislike about it is that I have to stay in school most of my time for my entire lifetime.

 If I'm a flight attendant, I can go around the world, but teacher always have to go to school.

>> If I were a flight attendant, I can go around the world. Since I am a teacher, I have to stay in the school.

However, it doesn't matter that much.

>>Correct.

 I can have positive thinking I can go to work many different diverse schools than anyone else.

>> If I have a positive thinking, I can work at different schools.

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