About temperature!
학생이 쓴 원문
In my country, there are four seasons.
It is called spring, summer, fall, and winter.
Spring is warm, summer is hot, autumn is cool, and winter is cold.
Sometimes I hate being too hot and cold, but I appreciate that there are four seasons.
I don\'t particularly like cold temperature.
Because low temperature makes my body condition bad and it makes me feel hard and sick.
강사 첨삭
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Take note of the corrections below.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
In my country, there are four seasons.
>> Correct
It is called spring, summer, fall, and winter.
It is called spring, summer, fall, and winter.
>> They are called spring, summer, fall, and winter.
Spring is warm, summer is hot, autumn is cool, and winter is cold.
>> Correct
Sometimes I hate being too hot and cold, but I appreciate that there are four seasons.
Sometimes I hate being too hot and cold, but I appreciate that there are four seasons.
>> Sometimes I hate it when it\'s too hot or too cold, but I appreciate that there are four seasons.
I don\'t particularly like cold temperature.
I don\'t particularly like cold temperature.
>> Correct
Because low temperature makes my body condition bad and it makes me feel hard and sick.
Because low temperature makes my body condition bad and it makes me feel hard and sick.
>> It\'s because low temperature makes my body condition bad and it makes me feel sick.
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