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First of all, the emotional attachment and love – Many families want to keep their elderly relatives close because they feel a strong sense of love. The second reason is that cultural values and traditions – In many cultures, especially in Asia, taking care of parents or grandparents at home is seen as a moral responsibility and a sign of respect. Placing them in a nursing home might be viewed as neglect or lack of filial piety.
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Hi, Charlie^^
Thank you for sharing.
Those are good points.
I totally agree.
_T. SHAY^^
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First of all, the emotional attachment and love.
>>First of all, the emotional attachment and love make families want to keep the elderly at home.
Many families want to keep their elderly relatives close because they feel a strong sense of love.
>>Correct
OR: The deep affection families feel often makes them want to keep their elderly relatives nearby.
The second reason is that cultural values and traditions.
>>The second reason is cultural values and traditions.
Thank you for sharing.
Those are good points.
I totally agree.
_T. SHAY^^
***
First of all, the emotional attachment and love.
>>First of all, the emotional attachment and love make families want to keep the elderly at home.
Many families want to keep their elderly relatives close because they feel a strong sense of love.
>>Correct
OR: The deep affection families feel often makes them want to keep their elderly relatives nearby.
The second reason is that cultural values and traditions.
>>The second reason is cultural values and traditions.
OR: The second reason is that cultural traditions often expect children to look after their parents in old age.
In many cultures, especially in Asia, taking care of parents or grandparents at home is seen as a moral responsibility and a sign of respect.
In many cultures, especially in Asia, taking care of parents or grandparents at home is seen as a moral responsibility and a sign of respect.
>>Correct
OR: In many cultures, particularly across Asia, caring for one\'s parents or grandparents at home is deeply rooted in tradition, regarded as both a moral obligation and a demonstration of filial respect.
Placing them in a nursing home might be viewed as neglect or lack of filial piety.
>>Correct
OR: Placing them in nursing homes can be interpreted as a lack of filial devotion and even as neglect of family responsibilities.
OR: In many cultures, particularly across Asia, caring for one\'s parents or grandparents at home is deeply rooted in tradition, regarded as both a moral obligation and a demonstration of filial respect.
Placing them in a nursing home might be viewed as neglect or lack of filial piety.
>>Correct
OR: Placing them in nursing homes can be interpreted as a lack of filial devotion and even as neglect of family responsibilities.
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