About the company

Medtronic is one of the best healthcare leading global company based on biotechnology.

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 And they provide medical appliances and healthcare solutions to contribute to human well-being.

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 What I impressed me the most on the website about Medtronic was that their mission “ Alleviating Pain, Restoring Health, Extending life)

>> I was mostly impressed of the website about Medtronic\'s mission about “ Alleviating Pain, Restoring Health, Extending life.

(also explain why were you impressed) :D

 Salary
Although I made big performance, I didn’t got the salary increase since I was in maternity leave at that time.

>> Although I made a big performance (you can also use \"made an excellent performance\") , I didn’t get the salary increase since I was in maternity leave at that time.

>> OR: I didn’t get the salary increase since I was in maternity leave. although I made a big performance.

 My average rate of increase over 15% yearly and I’ve got the best level with employee evaluations every year. And also I expect my salary in next year at this company around 20% increase.

>>  My average rate of increase is over 15% yearly and I’ve got the best level with employee evaluations every year. And also I expect that my salary next year at this company will be around at a 20% increase.

 Because I made the contract extension between GE and Manpower

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 without bidding with other company based on my big performance and it’s the first time since their business from 2012.

>> without bidding with other companies based on my good performance/excellent performance and it\'s the first time that their business from 2012.