about the most important thing
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most important courage.
childern grow old then They will be adult.
I think adults will have fear of failure.
so many people miss opportunity. And adult is alienated from success.
Also happyiness will be over.
For that reason, I think the most important thing is courage.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
Indeed, children do need to be courageous.
Anyway, please go over the corrections I\'ve written.
Enjoy the night!
~T. Jessie~
I think the most important courage.>> I think the most important is courage.
childern grow old then They will be adult.
childern grow old then They will be adult.
>> When children grow old, they become adult.
I think adults will have fear of failure.
I think adults will have fear of failure.
>> Correct!
so many people miss opportunity.
so many people miss opportunity.
>> So many people miss opportunities.
And adult is alienated from success.
>> And adults are alienated from success.
Also happyiness will be over.
Also happyiness will be over.
>> Also happiness will be over.
For that reason, I think the most important thing is courage.
For that reason, I think the most important thing is courage.
>> Correct!
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