About the ‘old age’.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I hear the word ‘old age’, I think of myself 50 years from now. At that time, I wonder what kind of job I would have, what kind of person I married, what kind of house I would live in, and what my life would be like. I don’t have worries about old age. Because I will live a wonderful life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
When I hear the word ‘old age’, I think of myself 50 years from now.
>>> CORRECT!
At that time, I wonder what kind of job I would have, what kind of person I married, what kind of house I would live in, and what my life would be like.
>>> At that time, I wonder what kind of job I would have, what kind of person I will marry, what kind of house I would live in, and what my life would be like.
I don’t have worries about old age.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I will live a wonderful life.
>>> CORRECT!
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